Monday, August 8, 2011

Round One Completed

Round one of edits on Fated Mates are completed. My editor sent me the edits Saturday night and I spent yesterday working on them. It wasn't too bad. If fact it was quite easy, so I'm hoping the worst is not yet to come. There was a lot of comma inserting and deleting, totally can handle that! She also asked me to make the prologue the epilogue because it gives away that the characters got together. I write erotic romance with   happily ever afters. Of course the main characters are going to get together! But again, not a big edit, so I did it. Then I sent it off. I think she was a little shocked that it took me such a short time. Hey, the hubby was still away filming Batman. I had a lot of extra time on my hands.

I would have to say the experience of being an extra was not a good one for my husband. First off, the hotel that I booked for him and a friend was a total rat trap. Never stay at the Comfort Inn and Suites in Pittsburgh that's all I have to say. He took pictures of the room. I would have slept in the car. The room had no windows (they had been stuccoed (?) shut), exposed electrical outlet wires, and they had to walk into a pitch black room to turn on the light because the overhead switch didn't work. Lets put in this way, I made the hubby strip at the door, not in a good way, and place all of his things in a plastic bag. Then I immediate made him take a shower. I think he was so happy to be home that he didn't mind the prison strip and shower. I'm sorry but I have issues. I accept them and embrace them.

Oh, and I will be writing to Comfort Inn and Suites to get my money back! The pictures will be included.

Peace out,


  1. Eww, poor hubby. Glad he made it home okay, though. And congrats on the edits. How exciting!!!! I'm ALWAYS bad about my commas.

  2. Congrats on the edits and yes I'd be writing them too.


  3. Oh, yeah! glad your edits are going smoothly! But...oh, man...poor hubby and the hotel.

    Keep up the good'll be out there on the shelves before you know it!

  4. Wow! I can't believe that was so fast! I really hope my edits go that smoothly!

    Poor hubs. I've slept in a few holes, but never that bad!